tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6110045251504627377.post551325343802786500..comments2023-03-30T10:35:30.897-07:00Comments on Perspicuous Pens: A Mothers WoesP-Chanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05070629507130431631noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6110045251504627377.post-68841866931967221632009-06-22T18:08:45.122-07:002009-06-22T18:08:45.122-07:00I think I would like to see the story longer, I kn...I think I would like to see the story longer, I know you don't like writing long things but that way you can get what is in your head out without feeling rushed. Most of your story ideas seem like they deserve room to grow.Peppermintwitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00201799073181694561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6110045251504627377.post-76621548513112075762009-06-15T12:15:51.326-07:002009-06-15T12:15:51.326-07:00Interesting....scorn mother? I like the ending tho...Interesting....scorn mother? I like the ending though and the detail in the story flowed very well.P-Chanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05070629507130431631noreply@blogger.com