tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6110045251504627377.post7106491775537287383..comments2023-03-30T10:35:30.897-07:00Comments on Perspicuous Pens: The Chess gameP-Chanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05070629507130431631noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6110045251504627377.post-35985425094969974152009-05-24T18:20:40.221-07:002009-05-24T18:20:40.221-07:00Dun Dun DDDDUUUUUUNNNNN!!! I just had to do that. ...Dun Dun DDDDUUUUUUNNNNN!!! I just had to do that. Very clever Nicastia, luv you.Peppermintwitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00201799073181694561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6110045251504627377.post-24023928514755701372009-05-24T11:34:14.232-07:002009-05-24T11:34:14.232-07:00The rhyming was great. I was sing-songing it in my...The rhyming was great. I was sing-songing it in my head, and the rhyme schemes fit perfectly.<br /><br />Good job.Grimeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17541855568983263317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6110045251504627377.post-58031455887048371972009-05-22T10:39:03.089-07:002009-05-22T10:39:03.089-07:00I'm not sure if this is a song or just a very clev...I'm not sure if this is a song or just a very clever poem but I love it. The rhyme scheme was very good and not predicable at all. A great little story wrapped with a haunting ending. Look forward to what else you have!P-Chanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05070629507130431631noreply@blogger.com