Said the Creator to his creation
over an intense game of chess
I'll bet you anything
Let's see who's the best
But be warned i've been playing
since the wee age of nine
you can't make a move
That is not in my mind
over an intense game of chess
I'll bet you anything
Let's see who's the best
But be warned i've been playing
since the wee age of nine
you can't make a move
That is not in my mind
One move,two move
the creator's face showed glee
you'll have to do better
if you want to beat me
His tin foe said nothing
his face told no tale
The creator was certain
that his Robot would fail
In two moves it was over
the creator was stunned
the answer eluded him
how the robot had won
He puffed up his chess
said what is your prize
you won fair and square
i admit i'm suprise
He stared at the robot
he looked for a sign
the answer soon came
your future is mine
By Nacastia
the creator's face showed glee
you'll have to do better
if you want to beat me
His tin foe said nothing
his face told no tale
The creator was certain
that his Robot would fail
In two moves it was over
the creator was stunned
the answer eluded him
how the robot had won
He puffed up his chess
said what is your prize
you won fair and square
i admit i'm suprise
He stared at the robot
he looked for a sign
the answer soon came
your future is mine
By Nacastia
I'm not sure if this is a song or just a very clever poem but I love it. The rhyme scheme was very good and not predicable at all. A great little story wrapped with a haunting ending. Look forward to what else you have!
ReplyDeleteThe rhyming was great. I was sing-songing it in my head, and the rhyme schemes fit perfectly.
ReplyDeleteGood job.
Dun Dun DDDDUUUUUUNNNNN!!! I just had to do that. Very clever Nicastia, luv you.
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